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Title: intro
Post by: KingDavid on July 27, 2008 04:17 AM

this would b the intro i would put in the start of all my movies which i will never make (:

http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=davidddvy0.swf (http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=davidddvy0.swf)

comments + constructive criticism welcomed, but im a lazy bastard so i prob wont actually fix shit

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Post by: GRINACE on July 27, 2008 04:21 AM

I like but when it says "presents" you shoulda made it zoom in a bit before it spined and whent away.

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Post by: psi43 on July 27, 2008 02:16 PM

The way the "presents" moves into the screen looks really wrong

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Post by: sQueef on July 27, 2008 11:47 PM

basically just fix presents

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Post by: CoolDrMoney on July 28, 2008 12:24 AM

Use an ease with Presents

Should help out a little

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Post by: Dailyman on July 28, 2008 02:57 AM

what song is that?

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Post by: KingDavid on July 28, 2008 03:03 AM

hysteria by muse. and guys i did the " presents " part in about a minute lol.

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Post by: sQueef on July 28, 2008 05:35 AM

fuck you

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Post by: adamant on July 28, 2008 09:30 PM

how about you drop the intro and just make a damn movie

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Post by: rtil on July 28, 2008 10:45 PM

lmao ant

yeah like what everyone else said. make the presents parts as polished as the davidmoore part

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