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Title: Robot guy!
Post by: white acid on May 26, 2008 03:38 PM
he's holding icecream because robots love icecream
Title: Robot guy!
Post by: rtil on May 26, 2008 05:30 PM
not bad. i would have picked a darker outline color, and get a little cleaner with the linework as well. the lines are a little wobbly. the pose also is a little boring, just front on like that. if you had a "yay icecream" feeling, would you be standing like that? try it out and see what you'd do, i think you'd be a little more excited than that. anyway, i like your choice of colors and the shapes of the robot itself. good work.
Title: Robot guy!
Post by: white acid on May 26, 2008 05:56 PM
Thank you so much for the advise!  Ill be sure to improve on what you told me to do next time