actually second flash ive really done but first time with a tablet... still pretty new to flash and it's pretty short so bare with me... by the way it's Rtil's intro style, black with white outline.
http://www.thebackalleys.com/ok/public/grin_start.swf (http://www.thebackalleys.com/ok/public/grin_start.swf)
up butt coconut
Eh. Clean that shit up yo.
eehhhhh it's ok i guess
i couldn't read the the graffiti too well tho!
it said grinace but it's still hard to read
also yes clean it up
Work on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
Quote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
this
you have a tablet now, right? use the pressure sensitivity. all your lines carry the same weight. things like the background of the city and the inner details of figures should have thinner outlines.
Quote from: MishkaMashQuote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
this
Not this. Integrating tweens into your FBF is a very viable professional technique, advanced tweening is difficult and can give you really good finished products. Any accomplished Flash user should be able to tell you that you should use all the tools Flash provides to make the best possible finished product you can make. (Okay that's pretty much me copying shit that Luis says haha)
But anyway, yes use the pressure sensitivity, but other than that it's a good start. I'd say it's a good storyboard basically... Not really finished yet, but good groundwork.
Quote from: SqueefQuote from: MishkaMashQuote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
this
Not this. Integrating tweens into your FBF is a very viable professional technique, advanced tweening is difficult and can give you really good finished products. Any accomplished Flash user should be able to tell you that you should use all the tools Flash provides to make the best possible finished product you can make. (Okay that's pretty much me copying shit that Luis says haha)
oh
I learn something new everyday, huh? XD
spend like a million more hours on the city and take out the flashing strobe deal. then all of the aforementioned things. especially what zekey said
[backseat mod] why is this in general? [/backseat mod]
Quote from: SqueefQuote from: MishkaMashQuote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
this
Not this.
I use tweens for almost everything.
I was saying he should use fbf because it looks to me like it fits his style more.
Quote from: TealonQuote from: SqueefQuote from: MishkaMashQuote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
this
Not this.
I use tweens for almost everything.
I was saying he should use fbf because it looks to me like it fits his style more.
Yeah but like I was saying, why not get the best of both worlds and plop some FBF into a graphic and tween it around. You can't always do this, no, but for something like a walk cycle or some such then yeah. I was more just saying it for Mishka's benefit because I luv him and I think he should be well-informed
For this flash in particular, I just think Grinace has a good start. Basically he could just take everything he has right now and redraw the art in it using the brush sensitivity and make the art look really good. And maybe add some nice music so it's not so dull. And add some ambiance, especially for the city shot, there could be a lot of lights and such in the city and a lot more detail going on, and if he was going to spend that much time on it making it look really swell he could even extend the shots so they get more exposure.
Basically it needs a lot of work. Just my opinion!
Quote from: MishkaMashI learn something new everyday, huh? XD
JESUS NO
Quote from: Loathsome[backseat mod] why is this in general? [/backseat mod]
good point
Quote from: TealonWork on your tweens.
better yet, don't do tweens, do fbf, unless you really need to to tweens.
I didn't do any tweens...
And i find teh pressure weird on me... besides I have to return that tablet for another since it keeps on giving me this popup sayin that i need to reset the tablet althought i did that several hundred times...
Lol plus i did it in like a hour...
Quote from: GRINACEI have to return that tablet for another since it keeps on giving me this popup sayin that i need to reset the tablet althought i did that several hundred times...
Is it the one that pops up when you turn your PC on?
or does it pop-up a lot when you try to use it?
Because everytime I turn my PC on I get a "tablet version mismatch" error thingy, but my tablet works fine so it's no big deal.
But if it's more than that then nevermind me!
i get a thing saying that " there is a problem with you tablet, blah blah reinstall it or restart system" i took off madd junk off of my pc so it seems to be working okay but i havent tryed Flash yet...
Rtil when you use Intous 3, did yours ever stop working for like 2-5 seonds (light stays blue when pen is touched) then starts acting normal again?
You guys are being way too harsh.
Very good for a first flash.
Now just tighten up the graphics.
Quote from: GRINACEi get a thing saying that " there is a problem with you tablet, blah blah reinstall it or restart system" i took off madd junk off of my pc so it seems to be working okay but i havent tryed Flash yet...
Rtil when you use Intous 3, did yours ever stop working for like 2-5 seonds (light stays blue when pen is touched) then starts acting normal again?
sort of, but that was only when it started to wear down , and the light would flicker and it was because the chord was getting mangled. i had to hold the tablet very still when i was working. if the light is still on and your tablet is not working, it could have something to do with your machine getting backlogged. is your computer very old?
Umm ive had this pc for about 4-5 years. i found out it's because of whne i load something on my pc like flash for example.
nice for a begining attempt at age .. 15? yeah man keep that shit up but it is hugely influenced by freetown
16 and yeah, I could do something different than freetown but I liek freetown...
Quote from: GRINACEi get a thing saying that " there is a problem with you tablet, blah blah reinstall it or restart system" i took off madd junk off of my pc so it seems to be working okay but i havent tryed Flash yet...
Rtil when you use Intous 3, did yours ever stop working for like 2-5 seonds (light stays blue when pen is touched) then starts acting normal again?
I have something like this...
my tablet stops working for a long time and then resets itself. It's why I take so long doing things on photoshop and flash
When my tablet is being gay I replace the batteries!
ur is wireless or somthing? lol almost everything in my room is wireless aside from my tablet and older video game systems, xbox and dreamcast for example...
Quote from: GRINACEur is wireless or somthing? lol almost everything in my room is wireless aside from my tablet and older video game systems, xbox and dreamcast for example...
I hate most wireless things. My tablet isn't wireless. The only things in my room I can find that are wireless are my laptop and a faulty ddr mat. other than that only my ps2 controller is wireless. yup.
QuoteWhen my tablet is being gay I replace the batteries!
Thank you for your words of wisdom!!!
I guess.
i must be intermediate
i must be high...
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