when I used a pencil it looked so much better
http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=r...mattemptfu1.jpg (http://img168.imageshack.us/my.php?image=realismattemptfu1.jpg)
ryan for some reason your image upload isn't working for me.
it's okkkkkkkkkay
it's a cool style. Would look frickin' awesome if it were colored
all your work is a good start but none of it ever looks finished and also rushed. i'm sure it did look better in pencil, can you take a picture or something?
also, what is the error you are getting with file upload?