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Title: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 25, 2012 05:08 AM
i regret to inform you that this does now exist : http://www.drunkduck.com/TBA_the_comic/ (http://www.drunkduck.com/TBA_the_comic/)

i am truley sorry for your lots
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: G3no on May 25, 2012 05:18 AM
Bravo, not even 5 seconds had passed and i cracked up with the first page.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: dilly on May 25, 2012 05:23 AM
 ♪ i am a happy dilly ♫
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Casey Pixmintro on May 25, 2012 05:28 AM
Amazing, truly truly amazing
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: rtil on May 25, 2012 05:53 AM
[swf]http://thebackalleys.com/dump/files/1/1773qA_checkthis.swf[/swf]
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Gladius on May 25, 2012 07:15 AM
pretty good cameo appearance by me but why aren't sinitron and pants on my judge's panel instead of those other two wannabes (https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2Fdj6yH.gif&hash=e2895f54e2f239f2b4fc52a860067f3349019a91)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: sev on May 25, 2012 07:36 AM
does BA in this thread stand for badass
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: redmongoose on May 25, 2012 08:18 AM
oh my goodness
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Crabarms on May 25, 2012 08:27 AM
I enjoyed that a lot.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Abnormal on May 25, 2012 08:48 AM
pretty funny/good

the bar has been set
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Fluffkomix on May 25, 2012 08:49 AM
My powers have been used most effectively, I approve.

Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Shida on May 25, 2012 09:51 AM
everything about this is great (even turning my stripy tunic into a shirt for a butt joke)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Gladius on May 25, 2012 12:18 PM
my review

(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fi.imgur.com%2FN2jLV.png&hash=02593fde2c464e05a84ceb9f582b369bfce8a037)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: G3no on May 25, 2012 12:26 PM
Also, rtil.... What's the song that you used on that close up video. haha, i kinda like it
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Blordow on May 25, 2012 02:50 PM
holy shit! when i saw (https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Foi49.tinypic.com%2F34eoyrm.jpg&hash=048852c9e9a1fae20f5d1e13b77c60d3662b222e) I almost died.

great comic, and I am trying to think how or where the fuck I did that expression
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: dilly on May 25, 2012 02:56 PM
in your how to make a tutorial video

why yes i have watched that video a number of times :I
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: shmeckelbutt on May 25, 2012 04:18 PM
lmfao oh my god

i don't know if the Afro haired kid is me or wasim but still very good
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Flash on May 25, 2012 05:24 PM
i loved this
especially the inside-joke-circlejerk-dance-trance
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: BluPhoenix on May 25, 2012 07:32 PM
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fimages3.wikia.nocookie.net%2F__cb20110615215916%2Fhalf-life%2Fen%2Fimages%2F6%2F62%2FGaben.jpg&hash=b90d5837666eb355bcd1abdf363e427e3271e386)worth the weight.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 25, 2012 08:01 PM
thanks a lot guys! im so glad you like it :D
i thought if it wasnt good it should at least be chunky so people can get excited about this comic story project

Quote from: Blordow on May 25, 2012 02:50 PM
holy shit! when i saw (https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Foi49.tinypic.com%2F34eoyrm.jpg&hash=048852c9e9a1fae20f5d1e13b77c60d3662b222e) I almost died.

great comic, and I am trying to think how or where the fuck I did that expression

(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.thebackalleys.com%2Fdump%2Ffiles%2F984%2F591L4q_blor.PNG&hash=071559132c1e5a3cb2bec316c785d491af839d6d)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: CoolDrMoney on May 25, 2012 08:51 PM
Finally we got ourselves a good comic. One of the best things TBA inspired. Chicken youre a real swell guy!

The Blordow face cracked me the fuck up too
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Sinitron on May 25, 2012 09:05 PM
"who am i help i dont want to be the gay one"
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 25, 2012 10:43 PM
nah sin its all in good fun!
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Sinitron on May 25, 2012 11:20 PM
no but seriously idk who is who i only recognized what was presumably red m
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Kooh on May 26, 2012 12:24 AM
10/10 would read again
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 26, 2012 12:37 AM
anigen, blu, shida, ash, redm and chicken are called by name in the comic

heres everyones original character description and picture.
if you still cant recognize people in the comic, then thats probably my fault because i didnt draw them well enough
shida (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248249)
anigen (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248771)   
dilly (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248254)
tammy (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248261)
stu (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248278)
flee (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248265) 
redm (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248285) 
shadowfox (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248296)
inkk (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248251)
chad (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248422) 
fluff (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248490) 
bluephoenix (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.0;message=248294)
ashington (http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/984/00d9D_ash.jpg)

and heres how i drew everyone:
(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.thebackalleys.com%2Fdump%2Ffiles%2F984%2F178B4h_tbacast.png&hash=fa3a961f678931475d2780158772cd4face47cc4)

also if you look through this thread (http://www.thebackalleys.com/forum/index.php?topic=11763.80), youll see everyones characters drawn by several people its all one big party in there


Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: ZennyPLUS on May 26, 2012 01:16 AM
Well done. That was fairly entertaining.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 26, 2012 01:29 AM
Quote from: Shida on May 25, 2012 09:51 AM
everything about this is great (even turning my stripy tunic into a shirt for a butt joke)

[spoiler]i actually wanted to give her a dress and turn the butt joke into a pantyshot joke (and when tammy turns into shida they get disturbed because they see his balls dangling) but i opted out of it because it would be too off-model and i was afraid it would offend people (but now the joke isnt as good imo)

i do have the skirt version btw. ill edit the comic if i get the OK[/spoiler]
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: CVG on May 27, 2012 09:38 AM
Oh my god Chicken I have not laughed this much in a long time! You really blew all the stops and delivered not only a very entertaining comic but one that flowed well, had wonderfully good pacing in the panels, timing in the jokes, and juggled all these characters like a skilled performer (for 12 pages even wow!). Not to mention the artwork was solid and the expressions and movements were visceral and energetic. I mean I could read not only the way these characters physically moved within the space, but I could also imagine the way they acted and projected their individual personas...truly great character acting! I think my fav characters in here was RedM for breaking the fourth wall and somehow knowing they were all in a comic and his faces were drawn so shaded and detailed and exaggerated like he came out of a Gil Thorp comic strip lol, and Ash's scene because of his boot kick in the chair and the sly faces he'd make.... Ah I loved this comic so much and I don't mean to gush but I feel it's truly deserved. Great Job Chicken! I actually want to draw my own character for this comic thing now...
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Shida on May 27, 2012 02:48 PM
Quote from: creamcorn on May 26, 2012 01:29 AM
Quote from: Shida on May 25, 2012 09:51 AM
everything about this is great (even turning my stripy tunic into a shirt for a butt joke)

[spoiler]i actually wanted to give her a dress and turn the butt joke into a pantyshot joke (and when tammy turns into shida they get disturbed because they see his balls dangling) but i opted out of it because it would be too off-model and i was afraid it would offend people (but now the joke isnt as good imo)

i do have the skirt version btw. ill edit the comic if i get the OK[/spoiler]

Go for it, bro B)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: funzop on May 28, 2012 01:33 AM
i miss you chicken
this is amazing
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: naturally on May 28, 2012 02:03 AM
i didn't get any of the yungjazz jokes but this was fantastic
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: funzop on May 28, 2012 05:31 AM
i got all the yungjazz jokes but this was fantastic x2

(https://thebackalleys.com/forum/proxy.php?request=http%3A%2F%2Fth01.deviantart.net%2Ffs70%2FPRE%2Fi%2F2010%2F267%2F2%2Fe%2Fmoonchild___marcus_n_drake_by_yungjazz-d2zextr.jpg&hash=348284a39e6c9364dbe9bc3c3f6249990a883252)
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 28, 2012 09:02 AM
Quote from: CVG on May 27, 2012 09:38 AM
Oh my god Chicken I have not laughed this much in a long time! You really blew all the stops and delivered not only a very entertaining comic but one that flowed well, had wonderfully good pacing in the panels, timing in the jokes, and juggled all these characters like a skilled performer (for 12 pages even wow!). Not to mention the artwork was solid and the expressions and movements were visceral and energetic. I mean I could read not only the way these characters physically moved within the space, but I could also imagine the way they acted and projected their individual personas...truly great character acting! I think my fav characters in here was RedM for breaking the fourth wall and somehow knowing they were all in a comic and his faces were drawn so shaded and detailed and exaggerated like he came out of a Gil Thorp comic strip lol, and Ash's scene because of his boot kick in the chair and the sly faces he'd make.... Ah I loved this comic so much and I don't mean to gush but I feel it's truly deserved. Great Job Chicken! I actually want to draw my own character for this comic thing now...

omg cvg !
its always nice to have someone with a keen eye as yours comment on one's stuff. i really appreciate this.
also, the reason why redm knows its a comic is explained by shida as 'i dunno, interdimensional stuff'. maybe its not clear what she means by that, but shes referring to his superpower: time travel and interdimensional manipulation. and why he looks different from the rest is because hes from a different dimension
and again thanks! i love you

Quote from: Shida on May 27, 2012 02:48 PM
Quote from: creamcorn on May 26, 2012 01:29 AM
Quote from: Shida on May 25, 2012 09:51 AM
everything about this is great (even turning my stripy tunic into a shirt for a butt joke)

[spoiler]i actually wanted to give her a dress and turn the butt joke into a pantyshot joke (and when tammy turns into shida they get disturbed because they see his balls dangling) but i opted out of it because it would be too off-model and i was afraid it would offend people (but now the joke isnt as good imo)

i do have the skirt version btw. ill edit the comic if i get the OK[/spoiler]

Go for it, bro B)

done

Quote from: nonzop on May 28, 2012 01:33 AM
i miss you chicken
this is amazing

thnx zoppa
i miss you too man :'(

Quote from: stusader on May 28, 2012 02:03 AM
i didn't get any of the yungjazz jokes

i dont think its necessary to get them (theyre kinda old and dead jokes too) to get the whole picture , which is that tba likes to hear inside jokes so much, they get send to an inside-joke-cirklejerk-dance-trance everytime someone mentions one.
but i hate to let you feel left out so heres what its about:

the wall joke:
Quote from: YungJazz on July 15, 2008 08:59 AM
Sup? My name (well, internet alias) is YungJazz. I'm relatively new to the animation game on Newgrounds, and trying to break down racial walls with my content.
people made fun of him about that for a long time (that whole introduction thread is golden btw)

the 'ill let you be part of freetown' town joke:
someone needs to find that picture zekey drew of yungs character with the arrows and shit, i cant find it
anyway, there was a while where people wanted for their characters to be part of rtil's freetown, which is ridiculous. yungjazz was one of them

and this concludes our tba history tour!
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: naturally on May 28, 2012 04:22 PM
Quote
Quote from: stusader on May 28, 2012 02:03 AM
i didn't get any of the yungjazz jokes

i dont think its necessary to get them (theyre kinda old and dead jokes too) to get the whole picture , which is that tba likes to hear inside jokes so much, they get send to an inside-joke-cirklejerk-dance-trance everytime someone mentions one.
but i hate to let you feel left out so heres what its about:

the wall joke:
Quote from: YungJazz on July 15, 2008 08:59 AM
Sup? My name (well, internet alias) is YungJazz. I'm relatively new to the animation game on Newgrounds, and trying to break down racial walls with my content.
people made fun of him about that for a long time (that whole introduction thread is golden btw)

the 'ill let you be part of freetown' town joke:
someone needs to find that picture zekey drew of yungs character with the arrows and shit, i cant find it
anyway, there was a while where people wanted for their characters to be part of rtil's freetown, which is ridiculous. yungjazz was one of them

and this concludes our tba history tour!

cool, thanks chicken.

can't wait to see where your intro comic takes this thing.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: tmk on May 29, 2012 09:02 PM
perfect first chapter, well worth the wait
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Ashington on May 30, 2012 12:29 AM
haha i wasnt aware this had been finished but its damn great and definately an amazing suprise! cant wait to see how this comic goes!
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Greenkitten on May 30, 2012 01:57 PM
Quote from: Ashington on May 30, 2012 12:29 AM
cant wait to see how this comic goes!

It'll get to chapter 3 and everyone will be too lazy to contribute
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: rtil on May 30, 2012 08:02 PM
so how is part 2 going to be approached? will the next artist be filled in by chicken on who's in the robot for continuity's sake? or are they supposed to just run with it
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 30, 2012 08:58 PM
i dont know how the story goes after this or who is in the robot but i could help write the next chapter if the next artist finds that helpful. the next artist can also use this:
Quote from: sev on April  2, 2012 12:47 AM
2. theme:
* EDIT: basic setting we decided on (how all of the characters know each other) is going to be a support group "for the gifted". this doesn't mean the comic has to always take place there, because that would be really boring. (spoilers: the support group is actually run by some rich assholes who want to eradicate people with aforementioned powers/gifts before they get in control of their powers and realize they could take over the world)
* people can have "powers (http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/StockSuperpowers)" or just general aptitudes/skill themes. try to pick at least one or the other
* generally, we decided that characters are going to be somewhat based on our tba personas. take that however you want


what im worried about are the characters. can people still submit more? or will that make it too crowded and is the whole story gonna be about those 13 characters? if its ok to add more, i think the new characters that people submit in the signup thread should influence what happens in the next chapter.
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: sev on May 30, 2012 11:33 PM
i think we can just keep letting people submit characters. if it ever gets too crowded we can just put a cap on it
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: creamcorn on May 31, 2012 01:23 PM
if noone wants to do the next part in the next 3 weeks i wanna make the 2nd part
Title: Re: a sincere apology to the BA community
Post by: Sapphire on June 1, 2012 06:09 PM
I'm dying. I can't handle these facial expressions.