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Critise on my skills. I want every last detail shot at me.
pretty decent. reminds me of powerpuff girls... but static. if this were animated, that would be a different story.
um, just sketch out geometric shapes before you base the product on them.
rtil, scribs (if your ever here), psi, you take over.
Quote from: Pants, the terrible on October 12, 2011 08:41 AM
pretty decent. reminds me of powerpuff girls... but static. if this were animated, that would be a different story.
um, just sketch out geometric shapes before you base the product on them.
rtil, scribs (if your ever here), psi, you take over.
Psi already told me they were pretty good
don't listen to psi
you can add details and shit but the rest is pretty inconsistent and there is no flow, being incredibly static and not in a good way since your lines aren't very sturdy
it's very noticable on the top-most robot's legs since they don't make a lot of sense when compared to the shape of his body, it most certainly isn't symmetric
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Quote from: Sinitron on October 12, 2011 11:07 PM
don't listen to psi
you can add details and shit but the rest is pretty inconsistent and there is no flow, being incredibly static and not in a good way since your lines aren't very sturdy
it's very noticable on the top-most robot's legs since they don't make a lot of sense when compared to the shape of his body, it most certainly isn't symmetric
A very reliable critic. Btw, i drew these two years ago, so I have changed.
"hi critique my art oh your critique is invalid because i made this years ago i'm BETTER now" fuck you idiot if you're going to ask for critique you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on
Quote from: Sinitron on October 13, 2011 12:10 AM
"hi critique my art oh your critique is invalid because i made this years ago i'm BETTER now" fuck you idiot if you're going to ask for critique you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on
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Quote from: Sinitron on October 13, 2011 12:10 AM
you could at the very least post something you care about getting critique on
i did want to see what this forum was like for critisism before i posted some stuff. like this
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recently new, just tried to copy the robotic style i did, don't think i did a good job though.
The head of it looks pretty good
I can't help but feel like you slacked on the body a little
I would not let that tail near my pizza
ropesnack 2.0 there
It's better, not as stiff, but as mentioned the body isn't entirely consistent and I'm not fond of the thing sticking out under the head. The head itself is fine.
sintron's dick there
no mine is hairier FUCK YOU!
sin read you post with a sexy voice and send me the wav