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Main => General => Topic started by: Philip K Dick on February 22, 2011 09:57 AM

Title: Ixintro's "The Summer Help"
Post by: Philip K Dick on February 22, 2011 09:57 AM
this me reading the (improved) script for the summer help by ixintro which never got done i think cause it was terrible

think about how good it could have been if he\'d used this:
http://hlg.furfag.com/worth%20teh%20w8.mp3

oh and here\'s the part of the original script i used for reference warning dont read this if you like being straight

THE SUMMER HELP

                             "THE BROWN BOTTLE FLU"

         INT. REBECCA\'S HOUSE- MORNING
         The sun shines through the broken blinds of a once fairly
         tidy house. It\'s now been laid to ruin by the likes of what
         appears to have been an incredible party the night before.
         Furniture is misplaced, food is everywhere and there are
         beer and liquor bottles in piles throughout the house.

         DEREK emerges from one of the piles very slowly with the
         obvious signs of a hangover.

                             DEREK
                        (Holding his head)
                   Oh my god, I feel like crap.

         DEREK looks around and realizes he\'s not familiar with his
         surroundings.

                             DEREK
                        (Tired and slurred)
                   Wha- who\'s house is this?

                             REBECCA
                        (Off-screen)
                   My house.

         DEREK looks over to see REBECCA in uniform standing at the
         staircase. She looks just as hungover, but especially angry.

                             REBECCA
                   My house... that you guys decided
                   to throw some stupid kegger at.

                             DEREK
                   But you threw this party...

                             REBECCA
                        (Pissed off)
                   Nope, I came home last night and
                   the first thing I know I\'m being
                   held over a keg! Come on, we\'re
                   almost late for work, I\'ll give you
                   a lift.
Title: Ixintro's "The Summer Help"
Post by: Casey Pixmintro on February 22, 2011 11:49 AM
Haha I still fuckin love that.

Actually I'm still working on it, I still need to rewrite the pilot script cuz it sucked balls. It's called "Summer Rec" now and I might get around to posting shit about it again soon.
Title: Ixintro's "The Summer Help"
Post by: lenko on February 22, 2011 12:04 PM
yea i thought you were makin a cartoon about the hippie girl first
Title: Ixintro's "The Summer Help"
Post by: Casey Pixmintro on February 22, 2011 12:13 PM
Yeah I did it for my animation final last semester and I'm still trying to get around to finishing it. Right now I'm in the middle of updating the character designs and doing animation tests n shit