I don't know. I'm kind of proud of it. I seriously have no self-esteem so please make all criticism gentle on my feelings. I feel like his ear may be making an encroachment on his eyeball.
it looks to me like you should lower the peek of the noes and round it off, and push the chin out more.
kind'a like this
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add a ridge above the nose for the forehead
curve the nose more
make more of an inner curve fromt he bottom of the nose to the upper lip
ridge of the lower jaw goes up and the end of it meets at the bottom tip of the ear, so the ear needs to be waaaay further to our left
eye needs to be more up, and to the left. it sits on a ridge between the top of our nose
hope this has helped
Quote from: rtiladd a ridge above the nose for the forehead
curve the nose more
make more of an inner curve fromt he bottom of the nose to the upper lip
ridge of the lower jaw goes up and the end of it meets at the bottom tip of the ear, so the ear needs to be waaaay further to our left
eye needs to be more up, and to the left. it sits on a ridge between the top of our nose
hope this has helped
Thanks a lot rtil, that really helps a lot.
Just one question: When you say curve the nose more, do you mean curve it into the face, out of the face or to round the tip?
curve it into the face. i don't think a rounded end of the nose would look good in this style
Quote from: rtilcurve it into the face. i don't think a rounded end of the nose would look good in this style
Alright, thanks a lot, sir.
Ahh, profile views
Here's another pencil sketch. I think I'm just going to dump my pencil sketches in here when I make them rather than cluttering up the board with new threads. Any suggestions on this sketch?
i like it
His neck is HUGE
Quote from: SystekHis neck is HUGE
Yeah, I noticed that after I uploaded it...
Quote from: SystekHis neck is HUGE
no it isn't, look at you're own neck.
Maybe it looks that way cause the shoulders are a bit too sloped.
looks like bad anime
whoops that wasnt very nice
u know i stillove u billy!!
Quote from: taylorlooks like bad anime
whoops that wasnt very nice
u know i stillove u billy!!
Aw mayun, I'm just experimenting and sincerely trying to improve
Saying it looks like bad anime wasn't necessary, sir
AND I SAID BE SENSITIVE OF MY FEELINGS GOSH
i wonder if kids in japan get ridiculed if they draw something that looks too western
Quote from: rtili wonder if kids in japan get ridiculed if they draw something that looks too western
apparently people in japan have a huge fetish for western culture
like the opposite of the states