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[ZennyPLUS]

Ryan Miller is now the entity of hentai

[rtil]

i could be , but i'm not....not yet

[Evelynn]

One day i'll be able to step through the gates of rtils Hentai Emporium filled with thoughts of joy and the certainty that any purchase I make will be a wise choice as well as a hard earned fap.

[shura]

glad we got that sorted out
I feel like all girls are a little bi

[Stu4U]

penny is bi
piper is kind of bubbly and clueless, but she isn't gay

Not gay doesn't mean she can't be bi...

THIS COULD STILL WORK

well it does get pretty lonely out in space sometimes.. and girls have their needs

look what i found from 2010

[rtil]

wow good eye.. i thought nobody noticed that

[bd648]

stu gets a pizza point for his excellent contribution to rtil's hentai palace

[Evelynn]

"The Space Captain's Lonely Love-Slave"

'Deep in the somber emptiness of space, a cry of love disrupts the mundane everyday work adrift an otherwise quiet spacecraft...'


-Rtils future masterpiece of lust and love featuring Piper and Penny

[zwimmy]

ryan maek yuri comic now plox

[rtil]

i kind of feel like i have to now

[shura]

are you really doing nothing with these characters? you've done so much art of them, i feel like you could just take all the paintings you have and just think of some suitable dialogue for a scene, and just slap something together lmao

[rtil]

who said i was doing nothing with them? i have some bits and pieces of a story for them, but nothing is really concrete yet. it's something i want to be careful with and do it right when i decide to take a leap into something like a comic.

[shura]

ah ok neato i was just wondering because you've been drawing these babes for years
are these images depicting moments from the plot or are they paintings done for fun

[rtil]

some are sort of , in the fact that they are real locations from the story. older paintings i don't really count anymore because they are just not as good as i'd like them to be. but some of the more recent stuff i am happy with

[rtil]

http://imgur.com/a/79snP#0
i would really appreciate feedback on this set of storyboards. the premise is that memories of people in your life live in little buildings on your head that nobody can see, and how they affect our lives. i'd like to see if it makes sense, looks like it would be a fun and cute short (it has to be around 3 minutes long). i don't want to hear that it is cheesy or corny because i know it is and i don't care. if you have criticisms i'd also appreciate constructive ones.

[soup]

i really wanted to know how it played out so i browsed over the whole thing. for me at least i guess it certainly is interesting, it got my attention and kept it. the idea is pretty cute, hopefully should appeal to a lot of people

i had to re read the ending tho to fully grasp the concept of the memories interacting with the characters, but overall the storyboard is nice and clear. it was pretty easy to visualise how the majority of it'll play out

im sure if its all animated up it'll make perfect sense

[creamcorn]

i read all of it and it makes perfect sense to me, its very clear.

i like all the symbolism in it, but im not sure what you mean by the abandoned houses (scene 16). is it meant to illustrate that she feels lonely? if thats the case maybe you should show more empty rooms before you cut to taiyou (scene 17). imo that should read better

also i thought the ending was beautiful, its a nice heartfelt story

[rtil]

it's meant to illustrate that she has given up a lot of memories and her last few years of her life to her devotion to studying. maybe i could show some empty rooms filled with books and papers like her room is? would that help? i would like to squeeze in one more scene there if anyhwere , because you're the 2nd person to ask about this particular scene.

[creamcorn]

yeah i read your response on facebook about that scene

i definitely think you should add some more empty house interiors (or a ghost town) to illustrate that the houses are abandoned. just drawing the houses abandoned from the outside (scene 16) doesnt communicate your point that well.

i think more empty rooms to emphasize that taiyou is the only one left is a stronger, more clear way of illustrating your point.

[rtil]

he's not the only one left, but i will make it seem that way. i'll see what i can do