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notorious · September 17, 2007 01:53 AM

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/400671

there ya go

rtil · September 17, 2007 02:11 AM

oh yeah i remember you saying you were working on this
ok so i watched it haha that must have been a complete bitch to make timing every single word the guy said with the line
i don't even wanna know what compelled you to do that
stylistically it works , although i was drawn between whether this cartoon was dominantly text-driven or image-driven
personally i wish that there had been more imagery to look at as the text was coming along the screen, but what was there already was good. some of the silhouette people were a little jumpy and lacking line consistency . the blur helped but try to make cleaner drawings for your fbf, even using the smooth or optimize tool can help and it will pay off in the end.
my favorite part was the line going from white to black with the gears, i dunno why it just was
knowing newgrounds i would not expect a lot of intelligent reviews for a flash like this, it's creative and they are generally not creative people . either way it has my vote, good job notorious

notorious · September 17, 2007 03:10 AM

thanks man, and yes, i did not get a single review as helpful as that. The closest was Newshape's, but then again you also are one of the only other animators who actually reviewed.

and ye the text was worse than i thought it would be, it was 3/4 of the time i worked on this animation.

Thanks for the support man it means a lot coming from you

trent bortknob · September 17, 2007 06:03 AM

isnt this from autumn EP

jebxz · September 17, 2007 12:02 PM

got boring quickly but cool

KingDavid · September 17, 2007 09:48 PM

I saw this on NG and was like.. is this the notorious from the back alleys?
Nah it can't be... but damn!

rtil · September 17, 2007 10:54 PM

no award but front page , bittersweet

views are better than awards anyway

trent bortknob · September 17, 2007 11:15 PM

Quote from: taylorisnt this from autumn EP

Why yes it is! Way to go!

notorious · September 18, 2007 03:07 AM

Quote from: rtilno award but front page , bittersweet

views are better than awards anyway

tru dat

and of course now that it's on front page i'm getting some pretty gay reviews, among the gayest would have to be

"Good execution, cool animation.

But the song sucks, horribly."

0/10

rtil · September 18, 2007 03:51 AM

he acts as if you wrote it

eventually those kind of reviews just become funny instead of frustrating

eventually

notorious · September 19, 2007 01:23 AM

lmao off front page already

o well it was fun while it lasted

Necronomitr0n · September 19, 2007 02:25 AM

Quote from: notorious
Quote from: rtilno award but front page , bittersweet

views are better than awards anyway

tru dat

and of course now that it's on front page i'm getting some pretty gay reviews, among the gayest would have to be

"Good execution, cool animation.

But the song sucks, horribly."

0/10

He liked the the execution and the animation, but all because of the song, he gave it 0/10. Welcome to NG.

rtil · September 19, 2007 04:35 AM

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well

Necronomitr0n · September 19, 2007 05:01 PM

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lmao

trent bortknob · September 19, 2007 09:29 PM

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