Girlchan in Paradise Ep1

f0d · February 22, 2009 03:30 AM

Quote from: KirbopherThe best stuff like this comes from people who actually have an appreciate for the stuff they're spoofing, and it shows. Loved it, can't wait for more.

i couldnt disagree with you more

it always becomes worse when it gets more bogged down with inside jokes

"have an appreciate for" lmfao

DrRumack · February 22, 2009 04:33 AM

Quote from: J_Seeddidnt laugh im sorry

CoolDrMoney · February 22, 2009 07:44 AM

Well it interested me cause its the first time I saw soethin by him that wasnt "awesome"

But maybe its just his kinda comedy brew I dont like.

Cornmander · February 22, 2009 04:03 PM

You guys are destroying my sense of humor!

You're making me feel bad for laughing at it.

YungJazz · February 22, 2009 05:16 PM

I liked it, I agree it was worth a smile but not a forced laugh. I think it was pretty much making fun of shit like what I make.

I would've honestly voted it higher if he JUST submitted the opening animation with the theme song, that was the highlight of the whole thing.

unclephil · February 22, 2009 05:44 PM

HAHAHAHAHA.

"surprisingly bad, unfortunately"
by: b-29er
date: 12 hours ago

this wasn't a good idea for a flash. you've taken a video that either doesnt exhist or exhists in some random nerd's copied video closet and made a parody of it. the animation was ok, but there was no storyline, or no egoraptor-esque comedy. top that, the voice sounded like some extremely ill or high colege student. then, you made it so long that any comedy aspect or value in watching was lost. who the heck are these people, and why, why are their ~7 guys randomely popping up in full body paint?!?

you said it best yourself-

"Deep in the cockles of some lonely thrift store lies a classic gem so horrible only the few great collectors have ever laid eyes on it."

here's where you could improove

1. parody something more main-stream. i mean this is too rare of a movie to parody. i havent seen it-ever. it would have been better if you either did something completely original with your own charachters, scenes, and influences.

2. the voice syncing was HORRIBLE!!! you're a flash ARTIST!!! not AverageNewgrounder or some spam artist. you should be doing this well.

3. the main charachters should not look like they came out of a chinese "karaoke" club. i mean, honestly, this is a new low when a charachter looks like a hooker. there, i said it, hooker.

4. kill the redundancies. i could only STAND to watch this for 3 minutes, and i would not be surprised if half or the text contained an abnormally idiotic name for a person or mountain like shinkenbatsuhatsu...WHY AM I GETTING SO FAR OFF TOPIC! (sigh). also the stupid references to brothers or sons or whatever. not funny.

5. everything was random. so completely random. a storyline would be nice

6. the voice acting was horrible. some exerpts may help
"uuh"
"uauuh"
"uuuauah"
it sounded like you took one take for some reason on voice acting. BIG no-no when the acting kinda sucks i mean, i would have given you at least a 6 if there was some crappy piano music and pop-up subtitles like some old-time silent movie, but the audio sucked.

i honestly dont know why this is being rated so high, maybe people see the name and say "egoraptor=10 and 5 review and score". but really, this needs to be fixed.

12 hours ago
Author's Response:

Wow

Alta Don · February 22, 2009 05:46 PM

lmao

Wow

DrRumack · February 22, 2009 05:55 PM

Quote from: Mr. McCraigyou're a flash ARTIST!!! not AverageNewgrounder or some spam artist. you should be doing this well.

aheheheh

funzop · February 22, 2009 06:42 PM

b29er has been sending angry pms to that account for a while

Daveb0t · February 22, 2009 07:19 PM

I'm not going to watch it

b-29er is a wonderful person btw, makes me miss topdog2007

f0d · February 22, 2009 07:28 PM

Quote from: CoolDrMoneyWell it interested me cause its the first time I saw soethin by him that wasnt "awesome"

ill give him credit there

Quote from: CoolDrMoneyBut maybe its just his kinda comedy brew I dont like.

yeah i know, his style of writing and editing.... it just makes me cringe. ill admit the first two minutes of this were ok, but were not satirical enough to be laugh out loud. then it went back to ego's old boring spiel

also cornmander we arent destroying your sense of humor, we're refining it!

Cornmander · February 22, 2009 08:19 PM

Quote from: f0dalso cornmander we arent destroying your sense of humor, we're refining it!

What if I don't want a refined sense of humor!

I want to be able to laugh at anything.

rtil · February 22, 2009 08:44 PM

averagenewgrounder gettin rowdy !

f0d · February 22, 2009 08:46 PM

too bad. the same shit over and over gets old, its bound to happen no matter what you do

there was a time when i could laugh at anything but life experience and age will eventually change that. you'll become a cynical bastard when you're our age whether you like it or not

wait a minute you're actually 15 right please tell me you're not 11, it would be kian all over again

Cornmander · February 22, 2009 10:15 PM

Quote from: f0dtoo bad. the same shit over and over gets old, its bound to happen no matter what you do

there was a time when i could laugh at anything but life experience and age will eventually change that. you'll become a cynical bastard when you're our age whether you like it or not

wait a minute you're actually 15 right please tell me you're not 11, it would be kian all over again

No I'm not 15. I'm 14.

Also,

"When you're our age..." How old are you?

Daveb0t · February 22, 2009 10:18 PM

E-age

we are dead inside

f0d · February 22, 2009 10:30 PM

Quote from: CornmanderNo I'm not 15. I'm 14.

Also,

"When you're our age..." How old are you?

20

lenko · February 22, 2009 11:57 PM

utah loves those big muscly men doesnt he

in fact does he ever draw anything else?

anyways i watched it and laughed but it REALLLLLY dragged on for the last few minutes. i think ego should have aped more things other than dialogue and plot points, cos the joke kinda got old after a while.

Chippychan · February 25, 2009 04:14 AM

I'm guessing I'm the only one who skipped the intro cause it was so horrible to listen to. I agree the first 2 minutes were good then it got too painful to watch, he should've cut the running time down to 2 minutes and pack all decent jokes into that time frame. Anyways, can anybody tell me what was so good about the opening?

zomfgbie · February 25, 2009 04:35 PM

Quote from: ChippyI'm guessing I'm the only one who skipped the intro cause it was so horrible to listen to. I agree the first 2 minutes were good then it got too painful to watch, he should've cut the running time down to 2 minutes and pack all decent jokes into that time frame. Anyways, can anybody tell me what was so good about the opening?

animation was solid