Christmas scene

[stevenr4]

Here, i wanted to join the christmas contest,
but i am sure that i am a little late for that =(

Please tell me what you think!
and tell me how i can IMPROVE the pictures!

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1 - Daytime,
2 - Night time

[Daveb0t]

The head was never huuuuuuuuman
The head is finally dead

[stevenr4]

The head was never huuuuuuuuman
The head is finally dead

???????????

[ZekeySpaceyLizard]

i actually like the simplicity of it


your night scene looks weird though

like you just darkened the colors


try changing the lighting on everything (except whatever lightsource is behind the tree) to a more blue or purple color

[shura]

not bad, but is there any way you could add more texture to the tree?

[stevenr4]

Here is my other attempt at the night scene!

I think i looks crappier =(

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[rtil]

the wall is a little distracting, can you soften the texture on that?

[shitturtle]

you should have softer light for the day one.

[f0d]

i dont like the way the window sticks out of the wall

[rtil]

i thought that was a present stuck to the wall

[shitturtle]

i dont like the way the window sticks out of the wall

lmao, i thought that was a present stuck to the wall.
don't ask why i didn't question it.
edit: :\

[shura]

i thought that was a present stuck to the wall

lmao so did i. i was so fucking confused, but i didn't want to say anything

[psi43]

why's there a present on the wall

also the second one looks better than the first one but that's a really jumpy wall. The texture of the tree doesn't look right either.

[redmongoose]

I like the first night one

[stevenr4]

i thought that was a present stuck to the wall

lmao so did i. i was so fucking confused, but i didn't want to say anything

yeah....

The walls looked blank, so i DID put a present on the wall, i did not realize that i put the collor scheme the same as most poor windows,
I will change that -.-

[stevenr4]

I am ADD, so i have trouble staying with one project,
I think i am going leave this one now,
i am happy enough with these results.

Please tell me how i can improve on future projects!

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[mishkamash]

uugh that "window" is bugging the hell out of me

[shura]

i love what you did with the star. it looks a lot better

[rtil]

The walls looked blank, so i DID put a present on the wall

hahaha awesome

love the star, you should move on now though, christmas is over !

[DrRumack]

i bet its hd plasma wide screen shit