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[shura]

taking everyone's advice in the irc, here is the 2nd version of the picture



the weird lines are outlines for shadows. i'm gonna redo them and color them in, don't worry, but for now, i just need advice on her basic form and outline.

idk what to do about her clothing

[shura]

[jjjjjjjjjj]

I think it came out well
Although the nose still looks sorta weird for me, the coloring is nice ya
Add a background or shadow.

[Daveb0t]

add beads of sweat and bruises

And  despairing look on her face and a dead look in her eyes and cuts and

[rtil]

i would pick a lighter tone for the shading of the clothes, and i'd use something with a hint of blue in it. i'd also only use a single tone for the shading, and if you want variation use a gradient. when you use more than two as you have here it gets very complicated because of the nature of vectors. in reality, the darkest tone of anything that has roundness to it is closer to where the shadow meets the light as opposed to the edge of the object.

below is a poor example of what i am talking about


in either case, i think a gradient would be better suited. gradients can express dimensionality a lot easier than what are essentially shapes of color

[shura]

ok! i've never thought of using gradients for shading before, i've always just used cel-shading, but that sounds pretty cool  ima try it

[rtil]

well it's still technically cel shading

[Zwickel]

bondage anime rape, cool

nah, i like the way the picture came out, its nicely colored too

[DrRumack]

hot

[creamcorn]

i was about to say something,but then rtil said what he said and i think i couldnt add anything to that so take his advice.

Other than that: really nice drawing!! keep it up

[trent bortknob]

sashura you're pretty good actually but i dont know why you always draw naked or half naked girls

[lenko]

sashura you're pretty good actually but i dont know why you always draw naked or half naked girls

Cos its what the tba crew loves to see!

[funzop]

sashura you're pretty good actually but i dont know why you always draw naked or half naked girls

Cos its what the tba crew loves to see!

cause its all she ever thinks about

[mishkamash]

:*

[shura]

so here's a little walking cycle that i created today.

http://spamtheweb.com/ul/upload/050209/78407_womaaaaan.php

i know it isn't much, but i tried    
i wanted to give the girl a lot of 'movement'. i know her bouncing hair and boobies may be a tad exaggerated,  i had so much fun drawing them

some advice would be great. i made a few other movement cycles, but they're too choppy.
er, so yeah that's about it. any advice for making it look less shitty?
thanks

[mishkamash]

it's really good, but i wouldn't make the breasts flippity flop like that

but it's exaggerated well so w/e

[rtil]

the boobs would be less distracting if the shoulders were going up and down with each step, that's what they would be doing to counteract the motion of her hips

[shura]

i did another drawing. i was gonna draw more battered women/rape victims, but i guess i creeped people out, so here's a picture of the opposite. a girl that will fuck bitches up >:C


i'll do cell-shading and add more textures later

[Daveb0t]

draw an old fat man

[shura]

draw an old fat man

haha why? you need me to prove that i can draw other things besides young women? :p