the lighthouse girl (working title)

Zwickel · January 7, 2009 11:44 AM

Your art is tasty like the cream in a starbucks coffee.
the coffee sucks but whipped cream is great

specially over sum titties : )

shura · January 7, 2009 05:16 PM

the lighthouses you drew are awesome. i think the one in the bottom left-hand corner of the first paper is the best one imo

lenko · January 7, 2009 05:35 PM

I fucking love those lighthouse designs

Daveb0t · January 7, 2009 06:53 PM

I like the structure and scheme. Surrealist with idealistic fantasy.

I would like to see more.

rtil · January 9, 2009 10:45 PM

finished the storyboards last night, next step animatic
might post them here soon

DrRumack · January 9, 2009 11:47 PM

oh boy oh boy oh boy

rtil · January 15, 2009 06:28 AM

here are the storyboards - 10 pages. some of these scenes have been changed now, but the general gist of the story remains. well the ending has changed as well, but uh anyway yeah

jjjjjjjjjj · January 15, 2009 07:30 AM

=D

shura · January 15, 2009 05:24 PM

rtil, this looks amazing. i love the style so much. everything is so adorable and Dr. Seuss-y
i really love how creative this is. it looks like it's going to be a long animation though

DrRumack · January 15, 2009 10:33 PM

good lord
this looks like its gonna be spectacular

rtil · January 16, 2009 12:11 AM

thank you

not sure how long it is going to be, but we may cut a scene or two due to time constraints. we're shooting for around 3-4 minutes

ansel · January 16, 2009 04:42 AM

wow i should probably poke my head into this forum more often

jjjjjjjjjj · January 16, 2009 09:06 AM

Quote from: anselwow i should probably poke my head into this forum more often

assnel

MRat · January 22, 2009 11:31 AM

Well I believe it will certainly be visually stunning and enjoyable to watch. The story seems pretty flat though. I'm not convinced any of the things happening needed to happen other than to simply get the lighthouse going. It's almost as if you've skipped introducing a conflict and just started around a climax and then simmered into a denouement.

Still, I can't wait to watch if for no other reason than for the sake of seeing very pretty things.

lenko · January 22, 2009 05:07 PM

she should have a fight against cloud strife and link to get da lightbulb

i hav sum dbz sound fx u can use

In all seriousness this looks really nice KEEP IT UP!

rtil · January 22, 2009 05:17 PM

Quote from: MartWell I believe it will certainly be visually stunning and enjoyable to watch. The story seems pretty flat though. I'm not convinced any of the things happening needed to happen other than to simply get the lighthouse going. It's almost as if you've skipped introducing a conflict and just started around a climax and then simmered into a denouement.

the ending has changed.

rtil · February 4, 2009 01:47 AM

scene 1 screenshot

mishkamash · February 4, 2009 01:54 AM

damn it looks mighty fine

Kirbopher · February 4, 2009 02:41 AM

Love how it's comin' out so far. The storyboards for the most part look very clear and nicely polished. The only thing that caught my eye negatively was the shot where the girl and her friend are leaving the lighthouse door (10). The angle of that shot looks almost the same as the one where her friend is turning the lights on, in the panel right above it (7). Was that intended? Otherwise the action of the hand turning into a key and locking the door behind it is nicely set up, but the shot before it happens seemed a little repetetive.

rtil · February 4, 2009 03:21 AM

those boards are outdated, some scenes have changed