Sumthin' I worked hard on

Started by YungJazz, January 19, 2009 08:06 AM

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YungJazz



I warned you, stupid.

stevenr4

I define people by what they do,
not what they say they do.

f0d

nice job, my only complaint is her left arm is very rigid and it looks weird depth and shading wise, like a paper cutout almost

you might be able to make it look less flat by shading the legs a little more
I have more of a life writing this review at 1145 pm than you guys do making these movies. . .

rtil

it's really flat

might look better sized down actually

mishkamash

they pretty much said it
other than that, i really like it. the coloring is nice
<lenko> i saw a hedgehog on the way home if i was drunk i would have yelled IM DOCTOR RRRRROBOTNIK and chased it 

psi43

small finger on her right hand looks weird imo

love the glossy shading on the earrings etc though!

Fuzz

It took me a while to figure out how her body was twisted. I believe it was the shading's fault.

YungJazz

thanks for the advice, it's my first time using this style so i'll work on it. in future pics anyway, i'm done with this one.


I warned you, stupid.

Michelle

i like how you actually wrote something on the books
still has confusing proportions but i think it's getting better, my complaint is just her backline...or at least i think that's supposed to be her backline. might be a wrinkle in clothing idk

i lyk dis style

Daveb0t

I think its got a nice and light color scheme which is soothing compared to what I usually see

MRat

I find the pose really awkward and as such really detracts from the quality of the composition as a whole. I really fucking love those colours though. Use them always, and you may be my friend.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

SnawsBall

#11
edit, nvm i alredy talked about my sht w/e  of sumtin akakakka nice colors