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Started by Slick, April 14, 2007 11:57 PM

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Slick

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/372806

One of these days I should really make a movie that has a point.

Or one that is actually funny.


This picture is something I did about a week ago, but it doesn't feel finished. Any ideas on what may improve or "complete" the picture would be really helpful.

rtil

the problem of it feeling unfinished is the vector art on top of the non-vector photo. hey're not mixing together very well. vector world should stay seperate from the real one. heh

trent bortknob

i don't know about what rtil said, I liked this

the reflections on the turntable looked really nice too

rtil

i nevre said i didn't like it ya big jERK

trent bortknob

/well all ya did was complaiun mna wahat wa I supposed to think with u whinin;' all over tha oplace

rtil

cuzx he asked wy1 so i said it!!!!!!!!!

trent bortknob

fuckinn prick!!!

rtil

banned, yo!!!!!!!!!!

Slick

There's so much love in this forum <3

Thanks for critique. Do you think it would look better if I vectorised the photograph then?

rtil

it's possible, or maybe vectored over it so you could still see a little bit of the texture of the board and all that jazz. cuz i know vectoring all that would take a little time.

trent bortknob

Quote from: rtilbanned, yo!!!!!!!!!!
man WTF???!?!?

RobjaFalu

I say leave it un-vectored. I think it looks pretty good. You took the lighting down in the picture which makes the vector work pretty well. You could strengthen up the value on the character, more darks, but other than that, I think it looks fine with it in a raster photo. Nice job!

rtil

Quote from: taylor
Quote from: rtil
banned, yo!!!!!!!!!!
man WTF???!?!?
y 4 u all hate me?!?!?!?! i'm leving 4eVR!!!!!!!!!!!!

trent bortknob

ok guys im leaving FOREVER im not comin back this time and you can't change my mind either!!!!

ok I'm back now

Slick

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#14
Okay thanks guys :] I'll try strengthening the contrasts in the characters and see how that looks RobjaFalu and I'll test out what you said rtil in a few places, if it looks good then I'll do the rest but I think it might take a bit too long.

EDIT

Thought I'd just edit this than post the image in a new reply. I changed the contrast a bit and also desaturated the photo. I then used a pink gradient  so the colours are more monotone. I'm not sure if it's better or worse but I'll let you guys decide.