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KingDavid

July 27, 2008 04:17 AM
this would b the intro i would put in the start of all my movies which i will never make (:

http://img366.imageshack.us/my.php?image=davidddvy0.swf

comments + constructive criticism welcomed, but im a lazy bastard so i prob wont actually fix shit

Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

GRINACE

#1
July 27, 2008 04:21 AM
I like but when it says "presents" you shoulda made it zoom in a bit before it spined and whent away.

psi43

#2
July 27, 2008 02:16 PM
The way the "presents" moves into the screen looks really wrong

sQueef

#3
July 27, 2008 11:47 PM
basically just fix presents
Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.

CoolDrMoney

#4
July 28, 2008 12:24 AM
Use an ease with Presents

Should help out a little
http://cooldrmoney.deviantart.com/

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Dailyman

#5
July 28, 2008 02:57 AM
what song is that?

Tha everlastin taste testin master matters.

KingDavid

#6
July 28, 2008 03:03 AM
hysteria by muse. and guys i did the " presents " part in about a minute lol.
Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

sQueef

#7
July 28, 2008 05:35 AM
fuck you
Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.

adamant

#8
July 28, 2008 09:30 PM
how about you drop the intro and just make a damn movie

rtil

#9
July 28, 2008 10:45 PM
lmao ant

yeah like what everyone else said. make the presents parts as polished as the davidmoore part
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