Lil Sumthin I whipped up

Started by YungJazz, July 1, 2008 03:33 AM

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Sinitron

#20
July 5, 2008 08:50 PM
what the fuck fuck you guys NO SANE WHITE PERSON WOULD BE SEEN WITH THEM NIGGAS

sQueef

#21
July 11, 2008 03:36 AM
Quote from: MRatNo what I mean is there is no rhythm of pace to the movie. It's like an Egoraptor flick, nothing but scenes obnoxiously slapped together.

A movie needs a rhythm, and is split into 3 acts typically (though not always!) and there needs to be a rise and a fall. Like a breath or heartbeat. You don't have this it's just... scenes. Even trailers have a rhythm and pace. This is nothing but imagery. It lacks pronunciation and emphasis. I'd say everything is overemphasized, but when they're all equally emphasized, then none of the scenes have any weight or impact.

All your work seems to suffer from this, and it's hard to explain how to fix it, because most people naturally just have a rhythm to their work. It's like being tone-deaf, but for a director. I find it very hard to watch your movies because I can't grip what's going on. I feel like an impartial bystander just sort of gazing at it. I can't be drawn in at all.




YIKES!
isnt that basically what.fla in a nutshell

albeit a loquacious nutshell
Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.

MRat

#22
July 13, 2008 04:34 AM
Yeah but with what.fla, we're not making a movie in any typical sense. There aren't characters or a world or anything but imagery and emotion to be engaged with. The desired effect I think is very different, so the approach can be.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

YungJazz

#23
July 13, 2008 06:42 AM
I guess my main goal here was to tell the backstory quickly and painlessly so that I wouldn't have to give that hideously evil "Watch all the other episodes to find out what's going on" line. But I'll keep that in mind mrat for future works.


I warned you, stupid.

sQueef

#24
July 13, 2008 08:01 AM
Quote from: MRatYeah but with what.fla, we're not making a movie in any typical sense. There aren't characters or a world or anything but imagery and emotion to be engaged with. The desired effect I think is very different, so the approach can be.
i think i began with it to make something for the sake of making something which according to wikipedia articles can define what.fla as "fine art"


Oh, wretched ephemeral race ... why do you compel me to tell you what it would be most expedient for you not to hear? What is best of all is utterly beyond your reach: not to be born, not to be, to be nothing. But the second best for you is—to die soon.

MRat

#25
July 13, 2008 09:53 PM
All art made for art is fine art. If you make it for another purpose, it is commercial art.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG
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