Robot guy!

[white acid]

he's holding icecream because robots love icecream

[rtil]

not bad. i would have picked a darker outline color, and get a little cleaner with the linework as well. the lines are a little wobbly. the pose also is a little boring, just front on like that. if you had a "yay icecream" feeling, would you be standing like that? try it out and see what you'd do, i think you'd be a little more excited than that. anyway, i like your choice of colors and the shapes of the robot itself. good work.

[white acid]

Thank you so much for the advise!  Ill be sure to improve on what you told me to do next time