Some of Ma' Work

[KingDavid]

kingdavid is attempting to break racial walls and connect with his cultural counterparts

*puts on sunglasses and acts all smug*

[YungJazz]

you're actually a pretty good animator. all i can generally say is what everyone else has said so far, just the stiff movements and such. what i would recommend is like doing all of the animation pose to pose in roughs before doing all of the detail. that way the movement doesnt have to suffer and afterwards you can go nuts with the detail

another small thing i noticed is that a lot of it was really dark. its hard to really grasp the visuals because of the lighting

but yeh these are just my opinions. keep up the good work

It's cool, I'll take all helpful suggestions I can. And I've begun doing that too, thanks. And I like making my stuff with a dark feel, but I think I know what you mean. I like using this "dark screen" technique with my movies.

i like your work man, very ghetto

Umm...Okay..... Well glad you like it at least.

No no, i mean like gangsta, phat, sickk, etc.

It's okay, I understand English. You don't have to put it in outdated street slang nobody uses anymore...