I need help

[Thor]

Okay, so I'm going to enter a film festival. I can do 2 entries at most, but I'm having a hard time figuring out which ones I want to put in. Input would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RbH3ewLVHK4 (either the black and white drawn cartoon or the final project at the end. These are the newest ones I've done so far)
http://people.umass.edu/jgchan/flash/burger1.swf
http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/shadows
http://www.albinoblacksheep.com/flash/paddleball

[rtil]

i'll tell you what i wouldn't enter
burger1.swf and shadows

[trent bortknob]

i was going to say enter the paddle ball one but the animation on the paddle does't make any sense

also dont enter the burger or shadows one

wait no the paddle ball one was gay too

[Thor]

So really it's narrowed down to the 2 hand drawn animation ones.

I still have some time left. I really want to touch up the line work in the trumpet one (as well as that end wooshing sound effects).

[rtil]

yeah i would definitely clean that one up

[Thor]

Or should I just send the pencil version? I think it turned out much better; I'll have it online in a bit.

Originally I wasn't planning on coloring it in, so I worked (like hell...) to get that 30 second animation done in 3 weeks. And then we had a week extension at the end, so I had to color in all the frames in photoshop in a week, and you saw how that turned out.

[rtil]

well it's pretty shoddy , you could go for the whole "rough" look but if the pencil looks better in your opinion then just send it.