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zomfgbie

January 10, 2008 05:01 PM
http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/419553

worked pretty damn hard on this

dont look deep into it, tis just a flash

enjoy
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

ZekeySpaceyLizard

#1
January 10, 2008 06:46 PM
trivium make good music

also that cartoon contained flying white sausages and now i am hungry

zomfgbie

#2
January 11, 2008 08:21 AM
i got my first award
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

Nadroj0711

#3
January 11, 2008 08:29 AM
congrats
'ello gov'na

MRat

#4
January 11, 2008 08:42 AM Last Edit: January 11, 2008 08:45 AM by MRat
Quote from: Zekeytrivium make good music

*suicide*

actually this song isnt that bad, and suits the animation really well. but once they turn the distrotion on their dual guitars, ugggh.




also. now you have more awards than me! i've been front paged, but never won an award.
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zomfgbie

#5
January 11, 2008 09:30 AM
never been front paged. that would be a pretty huge thing for me.
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

Thor

#6
January 11, 2008 02:12 PM
You did a really nice job with those little dots that fly around and draw everything

MRat

#7
January 11, 2008 07:21 PM
Yeah I really liked this, actually. It was so simple, but had a load of atmosphere, which is something I find so many NewGrounds cartoons are missing. THERE NEEDS TO BE TONE DAMMIT!


Anyay, considering what is on the Front Page, this could easily be on there and liven the place up. No offense to Move You Feet, that's nice up there too.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

zomfgbie

#8
January 11, 2008 07:24 PM
front page wouldve been sweet, i hope for that one day. even daily 1sts get around 20 - 50 reviews whilst front pages submission get around 250+
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

MRat

#9
January 11, 2008 11:23 PM
Quote from: FreekCfront page wouldve been sweet, i hope for that one day. even daily 1sts get around 20 - 50 reviews whilst front pages submission get around 250+


reviews are the main reason i would submit to ng more often. those things are HILARIOUS! "WHAT NO MARIO!?"
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KingDavid

#10
January 12, 2008 05:16 AM
typical ng review:

ya man needs work dude - animation and art were good but rethink the writting ! No mario refrences RESTART >:(

or:

OMG SO GOOD

LMFAO I LOVED WHEN MARIO FARTED AHAHHA I LAUGH SO HARD 5/5 GR8
Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

MRat

#11
January 12, 2008 08:12 AM
http://mrat.newgrounds.com/reviews/flash/responses


check out the response i got on the second review down. :/
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zomfgbie

#12
January 12, 2008 11:08 AM
reviews are more important than score to me, im not a knowleged animator or artist, im totally self taught apart from a couple of thors tutorials i used once, so they can help you to improve if you get someone with half a brain reviewing for once
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

trent bortknob

#13
January 12, 2008 04:06 PM
i thought it was a sloppy piece of pretentious bullshit but hey at least you actually finish cartoons that you start

adamant

#14
January 12, 2008 04:10 PM
Quote from: taylori thought it was a sloppy piece of pretentious bullshit but hey at least you actually finish cartoons that you start

yeah

MRat

#15
January 14, 2008 04:43 AM Last Edit: January 14, 2008 04:43 AM by MRat
I think Taylor you're a faggot for reading into a piece of art enough to call it pretentious and count you're interpretation against the creator. You're brain invented whatever pretentious message you got out of it, and you're to blame.

It was sloppy though, in parts, but hey, he's self-taught, and its still alot better than half the other NewGrounds garbage.
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trent bortknob

#16
January 14, 2008 04:51 AM
Quote from: MRatI think Taylor you're a faggot for reading into a piece of art enough to call it pretentious and count you're interpretation against the creator. You're brain invented whatever pretentious message you got out of it, and you're to blame.

It was sloppy though, in parts, but hey, he's self-taught, and its still alot better than half the other NewGrounds garbage.
i don't know why you seem to think that you are smarter than everyone else here but its really obnoxious

"You're brain invented whatever pretentious message you got out of it, and you're to blame." is like completely nonsense

ANYWAY the point was that ive seen so many cartoons like this that dont make any sense and are praised for being extremely artistic and they usually have the same elements (sketchy drawings, black and white colors, a tree for no reason) and i thought this was gay so i said so

MRat

#17
January 14, 2008 05:12 AM Last Edit: January 14, 2008 05:18 AM by MRat
i don't think i'm smarter than anyone here, i'm just calling you out on bullshit. i never even mentioned your intelligence. fine if you want to say it gay, but don't attack the guy's "message" or what have you. you made the interpretation, he didn't sit there and say to you "this is what i think, and you better believe it bub!" you discerened you own meaning from it all by yourself, and i don't see why you had to be such an dick about it. he even said don't look too deep into it. and saying that you're brain invented your interpretation is not nonsense, its about as true anything can ever be. you DID invent your own interpretation, thats why it's an interpreation.



anyway, i probably am being obnoxious, but you're being as bad as anyone else. besides this is the backalleys. we talk shit here, or that's what i've seen at least. no one says you have to listen to me. i'm just saying what i think, like you're saying what you think.


we all have the equal right to express our opinions.
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zomfgbie

#18
January 14, 2008 07:42 AM
ty for trying to defend it but if taylor said he liked it i wouldve deleted it and never animated again.
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

MRat

#19
January 14, 2008 09:22 PM
Quote from: FreekCty for trying to defend it but if taylor said he liked it i wouldve deleted it and never animated again.


wise words. haha. i would probably make ammends for my sins, because it would be pretty clear evidence the end of the world is coming.
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