artrocity exhibition

[Jon]

hey. i guess this is where i post art and stuff if anybody wants to look at it. personally i think it's really sketchy and i really really want to move away from that and towards 'finished' stuff. i don't really know how to do that, so if you have any feedback or whatever on that, as well as anything i post in here please please help me because i love to improve.






thanks/sorry. ive never done this before

[d-floe]

Nice job at finally making a thread you dip. I like your drawings do more

[Bamyasi]

Nice Bill Murray.

[rtil]

if you want to finish something just take a sketch you like, clean up the linework, make a composition (which usually involves a background) and start painting. crudely speaking, anyway

[crackers]

Hi, this is a really nice and diverse selection of sketches! Keep up the good work!

[zwimmy]

your art is better than ok!

[Jon]

thank you all. i promise to keep at it weeaaauhjhm,.l



tried to go from a sketch thing to a 'finished' thing but i dont really know how i feel about it

[BluPhoenix]

linework could stand some further cleaning

but ya its nice i like it!!

[ExBerian]

You did a really nice job on the shading for the tree, and really nice eye for that subtle shading on Deer-guy.
Btw what is that little cuties name?

[d-floe]

That tree really reminds me of Soup

[zwimmy]

That tree really reminds me of Soup

lol same

it's gr8

[SrsSam77]

I like this and you left it at a really good level considering the trouble you said you had with it, do more and become a better soup than soup

[MealGin]

The "bark lines", I guess you could call them, still do look like strokes. It kind of distracts me.

Overall, tho, I like it. Your art style is P neat.

[valiums]

Your art is indeed very ok.

[crackers]

I like this and you left it at a really good level considering the trouble you said you had with it, do more and become a better soup than soup

do you have something against me i mean do you have something against soup

[soup]

ive been rumbled

[soup]

also really nice work, there are elements of the sketch i really prefer though

i think its the crispness of it and the heavy line weight around the eye its got a very illustrative look that is unfortunately lost a bit when you attempt to "clean it up"

[Binary_2]

Elm you finally made a thread. Keep drawin and improving!


[spoiler]also you're a butt for taking this long to start[/spoiler]

[Jon]

thank you everyone for being honest about how you feel



struggling with the whole color, lighting, painting thing, wishing to know the best way to develop those skills more.

[Jon]

painting paintventures trying how figure out how to paint