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Quote from: crackers on April 11, 2016 07:18 AMmaybe im in the wrong degree..........
Quote from: Bamyasi on April 17, 2016 06:25 PMCan confirm both my parents were English majors and they are both unemployed.
Quote from: Numeromancy.It takes one to know one swift fell swooplike a bat out of hell and certainly the belfry.If you've something to prove to the birds and the bees,I won't bat an eye at your rhinoplasty.I'll take two hoots, 'cause I sure won't give them.Find somebody else to get up and go;I cry like I fly like a carrion crowand I've two left feet and no time to tango.It takes three strikes 'til it's not just companyany more — it's a crowd and my agoraphobiais making this worse, so I might disperse.If you don't quite care, let's put two and two together;playing pretend we're birds of a feather.I could commend, but that's such a no-no;you're more like a doornail to me, less like a dodo.And if you don't much mind, I might just take five.I'm chicken-livered, but at least alivethough I feel like a dead duck, dusted and done.I won't be there, I'll stay fair and square,right back at square one.Now can you see how this is cyclic?Makes me feel one sandwich short of a picnic,up the wall, and driving me sick.Apologies, I don't mean to nitpick,and I know I've a number of bees in my bonnet,but I've zero interest in your haiku and sonnets.So here's one for the road,turn by the way the devil drives you home,andone good turn deservesanother.
Quote from: Unless on April 14, 2016 12:47 AMQuote from: crackers on April 14, 2016 12:27 AMI would be happy to offer some advice. Drop me a private message and I'll gladly discuss my thoughts with you there.This piece was just one night's work that left me feeling satisfied that night. Not really anything that made me proud and I don't really care to expand it. If you have some wicked-awesome tips and tricks that you think would be more generally helpful (for me) though, I'd be happy to read it and weep, thanks.
Quote from: crackers on April 14, 2016 12:27 AMI would be happy to offer some advice. Drop me a private message and I'll gladly discuss my thoughts with you there.
Quote from: Unbrilliant pebble.Precious beautiful boy, stupid little fool boy, sakes alive, what am I to do?You didn't realise you belonged, and I guess I waited too long to tell you all the things I never knew I had to.A wicked world of damned doubts, a sudden single strikeout, can't believe I'm still here and yet you're gone.Now I guess I'll try to stick it out, but everything is so wrong and life has no business just going on.I have never felt more sorry; but if you'll forgive me, I'll avow:if you thought life was bad before, then you should see it now.And I have never felt more heartbreak; it reaps despite my bestefforts to rip the god-damned thing the fuck out of my chestand I would tear apart my eyelids if I thought it could help me seehow these diamond eyes bring some folks high, but they just don't fly for me.I try to consult my conscience but it speaks to me in tongues,so I'll settle for poisoning my liver and blackening my lungs.There's a wound in my world but I'm sadder for you for you'll never know happiness, forever uncompleted.You wanted happiness for us, but he's gone forever and I'm sorry mommy, for I am defeated.
Quote from: Unless on March 28, 2017 02:31 AMless about wordplay and more about evoking feelings, because...
Quote from: Unless on March 28, 2017 04:29 AMEdit - Normally I get a bit more than 35 minutes though. I guess just look at the 'Numeromancy' thing above though. I'm not really up for writing anything new like that right now.
Quote from: Bamyasi on March 29, 2017 05:45 AMQuote from: Unless on March 28, 2017 04:29 AMEdit - Normally I get a bit more than 35 minutes though. I guess just look at the 'Numeromancy' thing above though. I'm not really up for writing anything new like that right now.I meant post something by someone else that fills that criterion.The one you mentioned isn't completely incomprehensible but also doesn't point to anything. Wordplay is a lot like masturbation, you may find it touching, but if your poetry doesn't facilitate intercourse you should beat it.
Quote from: SrsSam77 on March 29, 2017 05:06 AMHow did in the world did I miss this thread and the opportunity to shitpost in it
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