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dilly · October 17, 2014 03:47 PM

I really like your style and use of coloring, especially on the monster and the girl's eyes! The only thing I would suggest would be to smooth out some of your lines, especially around her left shoulder and her knees to create a more rounder, smoother appearance rather than a blocky one. This is probably just because it's a WIP, but I think smoothing those out will compliment your colors.

I'd also perk up her left boob a little bit just so that it matches the fullness of the other. Right now, it looks a little squished to me! Let them puppies breathe!

tyvb · October 17, 2014 04:30 PM

Quote from: dilly on October 17, 2014 03:47 PM
I really like your style and use of coloring, especially on the monster and the girl's eyes! The only thing I would suggest would be to smooth out some of your lines, especially around her left shoulder and her knees to create a more rounder, smoother appearance rather than a blocky one. This is probably just because it's a WIP, but I think smoothing those out will compliment your colors.

I'd also perk up her left boob a little bit just so that it matches the fullness of the other. Right now, it looks a little squished to me! Let them puppies breathe!

Thank you for the feedback! I'll be cleaning up the lines soon and you couldn't be more right about her boob. I just couldn't see it for some reason. Thank you!

tyvb · October 29, 2014 05:04 AM

Some gesture drawing I started doing at the advice of everyone. These are about 120 second sketches.

rtil · October 29, 2014 06:42 AM

very nice, good form. i'd like to see you experiment more with your linework, maybe using hatching in place of some lines where things taper, or using the side of your pencil to block in quick shading for volume. it will help you budget your linework even more and find out which shapes are the most important to block in

SHADOWFOX2 · October 29, 2014 11:14 AM

Mmmmmmmm budgets and shapes
Mmmmmmmm progress...

tyvb · October 30, 2014 01:40 AM

Quote from: SrsSam77 on October 17, 2014 05:10 AM
TL;DR git gud, git motivated, make dolla bills yall

Wisdom.

Also, another sketch I had fun with today.
Edit: Myrrah again.

dilly · October 30, 2014 03:34 AM

I really like the details you put into this sketch! it almost doesn't need color to make it stand out. The only thing that seems off to me is her feet look a little smaller than the rest of her proportions, but what do I know!!!!

tyvb · October 30, 2014 04:08 AM

You're right on that one; the feet are indeed small. I got nervous about the feet for some reason and ended up being tiny. I've noticed that the less confident I am in my drawing, the smaller whatever I'm drawing turns out. I should stop that ;w;
By the way, I'm not sensitive to critiques. I want to hear this kind of stuff! I don't think there is any sense in being buttmad about a legitimate criticism, especially if I drew something wrong. Its how I learn!

michaell · October 31, 2014 03:15 AM

woaaa thats fuckin good

tyvb · November 25, 2014 07:51 PM

A couple of doodles I made for a friend. Fiona and Huntress Wizard.
I new realize that I need more practice with hands, and that bump doesn't belong of Fiona's hip.

zwimmy · November 26, 2014 02:28 AM

Looks cute! Nice to see you posting again!

tyvb · November 26, 2014 03:06 AM

Quote from: zwimmy on November 26, 2014 02:28 AM
Looks cute! Nice to see you posting again!

I was lamenting over the death of my tablet pen.;w;

Also, thank you!

tyvb · December 31, 2014 02:25 AM

WIP

rtil · December 31, 2014 02:56 AM

my only complaint is that i don't think that a hat like that would wrap underneath the chin like that, unless it has some kind of grip on the chin. it should thin out as it reaches the bottom of the chin, like a pinch. think about how the fabric would wrap around the jawline. hope that makes sense.

tyvb · November 12, 2016 12:41 AM