Artwork and Slightly Damp Question Marks.

[Tardigrade]

Indeed, I feel that is a major problem with what it is I produce, as mentioned previously. Aside from the fact the piece in general is very messy in regards to the execution of the colours and forms, I feel that I should have focused more upon emphasising the textures of the subjects (such as the moss and tree bark). Implying textures of subjects is also another facet I am presently focused upon improving.

Anyway, thank you once again, Rtil for your feedback.

[bd648]

it is slightly messy. i was going to say something about changing up your medium but WELP YOU ALREADY DID THAT! GJ! Also tardigrades. nice.

[Tardigrade]

It's been a while since I updated this thread, so here's some things.

Here's a couple of studies from some skulls:





The first one is a sheep, the second is a badger. Criticism would be appreciated as usual.

[slack]

more skulls

[Tardigrade]

Man, I haven't been here in a while, so here's a bunch of things from the past months that you didn't ask to see:











If you could give crits that would be good as I need to be less shit at what I do.

[rtil]

i see really subtle strokes in your pointillism. i'd be curious to see what you could do with hatching.

for the painted piece, try carving out sharper edges by painting with the background color or your eraser. it will help you get rid of those soft and round nubs around corners that round brushes tend to make. for something as menacing as that beetle, it would suit it well

[crackers]

i like the beetles

[Tardigrade]

Thanks guys. Rtil, I will take your advice into consideration. Pointillism is fun, I've been studying scientific illustration so I've been practicing pen and ink techniques a lot. Anyway, here's some more things that are also relatively recent: