Needing some hard words

[CaryTheFace]

I\\\'m looking for critisism on these, the one on the left isnt important,
but i think i\\\'m going to be making an animation/movie thing off of pobot (the right one)
any ideas to better his appearance?



Here, i meant to get the image up here

[rtil]

well for starters you should try starting to draw him in flash. since he is a very graphic character, get rid of the thick outlines on the outer shape of his body and just experiment with colors on colors.