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Bamyasi · April 13, 2014 03:10 PM

Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on April 13, 2014 03:00 PM
Quote from: Bamyasi on April 7, 2014 08:07 AM
Finish your story and don't come back until it's done, motherfucker.

Did it not seem finished?

Binary_2 · April 13, 2014 03:32 PM

Most valuable literature 2014

SHADOWFOX2 · April 13, 2014 06:41 PM

Quote from: Bamyasi on April 13, 2014 03:10 PM
Did it not seem finished?

Oh you posted it right when I posted mine.
I am still reading!

SHADOWFOX2 · April 14, 2014 12:07 AM

All done
That was probably the best thing I've sat down and taken the time to read in a good while.
20/3, would read again
Seriously though it was great

Bamyasi · April 14, 2014 02:00 AM

Awww thanks guys.

bd648 · April 14, 2014 10:30 AM

i was entertained. good job.

Bamyasi · April 14, 2014 01:06 PM

Stay tuned for Part 2: The Marination.
[spoiler]Coming summer 2015.[/spoiler]

Stu4U · April 15, 2014 12:46 AM

finally got around to reading this.
and it was one of the best and most hilarious things i've read this year.

[spoiler]poor seannyj[/spoiler]

you still taking suggestions?

rtil · April 15, 2014 03:43 AM

i have to say, if their story was one of comedic lesbian shenanigans, this would be it.

it is a shame that they met such a tragic end after their heroic efforts. it is sad that all those moments will be lost in time.. like tears in rain.

Bamyasi · April 15, 2014 04:15 AM

If it's any consolation, at that point in the battle they had no other options to defeat the enemy, and their sacrifices made the Milky Way Galaxy a marginally safer place for T&A. They knew it was time to die.

Quote from: Stu4U on April 15, 2014 12:46 AM
finally got around to reading this.
and it was one of the best and most hilarious things i've read this year.

you still taking suggestions?

Glad you enjoyed it, thanks a bunch for the idea. I'm definitely still taking suggestions, but I'm trying to do them all in order so it might be a little while. Please don't hesitate if you have another idea, I had a lot of fun with this one.

rtil · April 15, 2014 04:22 AM

Quote from: Bamyasi on April 15, 2014 04:15 AM
If it's any consolation, at that point in the battle they had no other options to defeat the enemy, and their sacrifices made the Milky Way Galaxy a marginally safer place for T&A. They knew it was time to die.

it's too bad they don't live, but then again who does?

seriously though despite being totally absurd it was written well and funny in all the right places. i like when a writer briefly steps out of the scene to jokingly reassure their audience of something. it keeps it more down to earth , even though everything that's going on in it is pretty hot and heavy.

funnily enough Penny is bi in canon, although she isn't ashamed of it. she just doesn't talk about it and doesn't consider it a big deal. and i'm afraid she will never be clever enough to employ the helper bots in all the exciting new ways you imagined. but i'm sure someone out there has.

Bamyasi · April 15, 2014 05:09 AM

Quote from: rtil on April 15, 2014 04:22 AM
seriously though despite being totally absurd it was written well and funny in all the right places. i like when a writer briefly steps out of the scene to jokingly reassure their audience of something. it keeps it more down to earth , even though everything that's going on in it is pretty hot and heavy.

This really means a lot, thanks.

Quote from: rtil on April 15, 2014 04:22 AM
pretty hot and heavy.

Just like Penny (wink).

Quote from: rtil on April 15, 2014 04:22 AM
funnily enough Penny is bi in canon, although she isn't ashamed of it. she just doesn't talk about it and doesn't consider it a big deal.

I guess everyone was getting a bit silly after a few weeks of exposure to the neurotoxin, please attribute any non-canonical character adjustments to that. Penny was just having a bit of trouble conceptualizing sexual fluidity, Piper turned maniacally sexy and evil, and Marin lost her ability to be covert.

But seriously I'm really happy (and relieved) that you enjoyed it. There were parts (all of it really) where I was like "What the actual fuck am I doing to these lovely and beautiful characters whom I treasure and adore, rtil is going to hate me," so I'm glad you weren't offended, because I ended up not censoring anything. You could say I've done... questionable things.

Quote from: rtil on April 15, 2014 04:22 AM
i'm afraid she will never be clever enough to employ the helper bots in all the exciting new ways you imagined. but i'm sure someone out there has.

I kind of hope not, honestly. That would upset me terribly. Such misuse should only be confined to the decrepit ghetto of alt-universe fanfiction.

rtil · April 15, 2014 05:20 AM

i have a hard time imagining something of this nature could offend me, it's amusing to see how people interpret creations of your own. it played out like a wild dream one of them could have after sleeping on a full stomach and an untamed imagination. maybe not the whole thing, but parts of it.

Bamyasi · April 15, 2014 05:46 AM

Well I guess all I can say is thanks for being a cool person.

SHADOWFOX2 · April 28, 2014 12:19 AM

Is this the end

Stu4U · April 28, 2014 12:34 AM

we just need more suggestions

SHADOWFOX2 · April 28, 2014 12:40 AM

Wait are you doing these too?

Bamyasi · April 28, 2014 01:56 AM

I've been busy this last week but I will get to all your suggestions I promise.

Also I declare this thread open for anyone to post their own titillating titles (in case Stu or wop wanted to join the party).

Stu4U · April 28, 2014 02:09 AM

Quote from: SHADOWFOX2 on April 28, 2014 12:40 AM
Wait are you doing these too?

nononono we just need more suggestions to give to bam. sorry that confused you.

SHADOWFOX2 · April 30, 2014 08:49 AM

I-it's not like I want you to work on my suggestion...