Started by BluPhoenix, January 16, 2014 12:59 AM
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Quote from: rtil on January 19, 2014 08:29 AMcompositionally speaking the wangan midnight pic has good framing. the other ones have some perspective issues.i'll go ahead and link this resource here as well since i like it so much. you might find some useful stuff here. there are also a lot of amazing tutorials on deviantart , as well as many bad ones, but it's a good place to look also http://learninganatomy.tumblr.com/
Quote from: creamcorn on January 19, 2014 08:34 AMthe drawing you redid is slighty better now. you got rid of that bedpost on the left which is good (it was distracting) but its still pretty much the same other than that.next time you wanna make a drawing like that i suggest you learn to make tiny thumbnails first to get the composition right. same goes for that last drawing. making thumbnails forces you to focus on the whole picture first so you wont get lost in the detailsjust google 'composition thumbnails' to see what im talking about. e-zsame for the second picture. i mean, his upper body detail is nice and all, but the shapes are all wonky! the proportions are off as well and he looks flat.easy to remember tip for life drawing: forget what you 'know' about human anatomy. just draw what you SEE. good luck dude keep at it
Quote from: BluPhoenix on January 19, 2014 08:13 AMhey it's been a whole 3 days so i guess i'll drop off what i've been doingredid this picture (the original one is about 3 months old)
Quote from: rtil on April 7, 2014 06:00 AMmy suggestion is also to use the eraser and get rid of a lot of the extra lines you have . you can carve out shapes using the eraser as well. think of it as a brush that paints white. like in this area right herethere's a lot of marks that don't have to be there.
Quote from: rtil on April 7, 2014 06:00 AMmainly i think your biggest issue is the overall construction of the anatomy. things don't quite match up right, you've got body parts that aren't joined correctly that differ too much in size. individually they work, but in context of the entire body they don't. a good way to avoid this is to learn how to gesture a body with basic skeletal construction before going into the full body poses you are doing. especially ones with clothing , i don't think you're at a technical level yet where you're ready to tackle cloth. basically you are skipping a few steps somewhere along the line and it's hurting your anatomy a lot.you need to do more pics like your 1st one , but with more attention to detail and really learning how the body is constructed. you can also benefit a lot from doing things like studies of certain body parts on their own, like heads, faces, hands, etc.
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