the drop-off

Started by hattie, February 7, 2012 01:57 AM

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Good god that is adorable.

dilly

Hattie i must have your designs on clothing.

Or tote bags

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hattie



so for class i had to illustrate a controversial topic and i chose polygamy.
any critiques or suggestions on what else i can cram into this?

bd648

very very good. a large range of types of people. and excellent artwork.

it may just be me but the depth seems a bit strange. i cant quite put my finger on why.
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hattie

Quote from: bd648 on October  2, 2012 12:12 AM
it may just be me but the depth seems a bit strange. i cant quite put my finger on why.

i feel the same way
the angle looks weird to me, i'm not sure what it is or how to fix it though.

BluPhoenix

loving the shapely curves of the characters, i like how all the poses seem to have action or at the least DETAIL(see:sleeping)

i agree on the depth, but i don't think it's the angle, it has more to do with how the foreground elements are the same size or SMALLER than the background elements
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hattie

all the characters i drew separately so i need to resize some of them.
and yeah, i figured since the room isnt that big that there wouldn't need to be a lot of depth. the girls playing chess can definitely be bigger, so could the television maybe

rtil

yes the composition itself needs work. there is too much empty space, and everyone feels isolated from eachother.  this many people in a scene can get really complicated. but i think you can work with this. i don't think the lamp or the tv with the video game needs to be in thiis picture, nobody is interacting with them and they don't help tell the story.

to make the guy the centerpiece you'd probably have to redraw some things. but if you don't want i think some simple cropping and re-arranging could help