G3no's Box

G3no · December 10, 2013 01:52 AM

you know what it's based on

Sinitron · December 10, 2013 05:03 AM

to me it seems like a lot of problems with your picture stems from the color use, like they're all very synthetic and it makes it kind of difficult on the eyes

the glow you added to the grassy hills also makes them look more like lumps of green plastic shit rather than grass blowing in the wind

the foreground dirt and clouds are pretty cool, but pretty much everything green looks kind of off, the rocks and trees don't merge with the ground at all they just sort of 'appear'

G3no · December 10, 2013 05:08 AM

i really appreciate the critique (which i agree to) , i was shocked you didnt insult left and right

Sinitron · December 10, 2013 05:36 AM

textwall dumped on skype elaborating on why and how

basically boils down to lots of little inconsistencies with each element, which add up to make the whole piece somewhat disjointed

DON'T TRY TO RECTIFY

make a whole new picture with a similar theme (outside, green grass and clear skies) and apply any new-found knowledge

G3no · December 13, 2013 01:14 PM

WIP

G3no · December 27, 2013 01:41 AM

Colored Doodle

i was going to do more of this one , but couldnt

other stuff :

slack · December 30, 2013 08:11 PM

HUMP
HUMP
HUMP
HUMP

G3no · January 8, 2014 07:00 PM

cipher · January 8, 2014 08:05 PM

EXTREME RICE

rtil · January 8, 2014 09:05 PM

haha, i like it. my only suggestion is that when she slices open the cans, i think it would look better if it was a clean cut instead of jagged, since she's slicing through it super fast.

also, you spelled 'sausage' wrong on the last panel

G3no · January 9, 2014 12:01 AM

damn it , i should have made a that V sharper

rtil · January 9, 2014 12:16 AM

oh

it says savage

Stu4U · January 9, 2014 12:18 AM

what would sausage maniac even mean lol

rtil · January 9, 2014 12:37 AM

i thought it had something to do with her mercilessly slaughtering the pig or something

slack · January 9, 2014 12:44 AM

sounds like a really nice way to say "cock sucker"

G3no · January 10, 2014 11:49 AM

i needed a breather

nsfw

http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/2577/3254wL_EllieMattridenormal.png

in case you want no ridiculous liquids > http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/2577/3534oP_EllieMattrideclean.png

dilly · January 10, 2014 05:23 PM

nice comic and naughty picture!!!

G3no · January 18, 2014 04:34 AM

rtil · January 18, 2014 05:18 AM

this should be DARE's new ad campaign

your lungs WILL fly out of your mouth. not even once

G3no · January 20, 2014 09:44 PM

I don't normally put roughs of things i'm going to paint , but i couldn't contain myself

100% Zoom http://www.thebackalleys.com/dump/files/2577/5405mA_DoodleFest.png