My little freestyle!

Started by GRINACE, October 24, 2007 11:24 PM

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GRINACE

Lol I was bored, freestyling as I would normally do... I found a cool punchline and worked on it...

here's the finished work...

Tell me what you think!

To the beat of Dj Khaled - We taking over...

Geographic figures only collide when measured right/
im a parallel trapizoid , you could never touch me ieght/
Aside from the sidelines then call it a fight?/
get ready, scared with a machetti/
lines like spaggetti,
90 degree angle in you face/
and yes I bet you could relate to the disgrase/
with out even being able to rap at my pace/
cannot mess with this ace/
grinning because the matter is I don't battle at all/
while im breaking your fall/
the hundred kids wating wanna withdrawl/
sometimes I rap so fast that my voice get's a motion blur/
sometimes making you hurl/
most of the times making you whirl/
like when the girls play jumprope, the rope just spinning in twirls/
I can go on on, like your favorite song/
most of the times im right, but I could be wrong/
talk about hot? more steam from the smoke that comes outta a bong/
leave you confuzed, don't know whats going on/
Im all about people's egalitarianism/
I get madd when people use racial sectarianism/
im never found free in nature, like I was potassium/
I could be light but strong, like I was titanium/
My rhymes are radioactive like they were made of uranium/

Idk I was bored, remember that...

KingDavid

nother soulja boy animator
Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

GRINACE

Ahem, Just so you know, I do not rap the way nor use the beats from the new school (aside from this beat). I try to actually put quality in my rhymes...I haven't written in about a good 5 months so please don't compare this to Soulja boy or any of the horrible rap you hear now a days...

Nadroj0711

quite nice
what's the tempo
'ello gov'na

trent bortknob