my first cartoon

[Alta Don]

hah ya the ending is better with the cut i think , you could have even cut off most of the 'fuck' at the f part but it's just a few frames.

the zooming in on the eyebrows when he decide what to do is a little strange, but other than that it's good for a first cartoon.

any reason why you decided to use real backgrounds besides to save time?

Thanks. I have to hand in the cartoon before december 1 cause thats when the college wants it. Plus im terrible when it comes to backgrounds. I didnt have enough time

5d, liked on facebook and threw you a piza point

thanks alot man

[emanhattan]

nice job joey! it was good for your first cartoon. just try to keep your sounds and your music in separate layers. i think it would make more sense if the music never stopped troughout the cartoon (until he takes his earbuds off). theres a way to control how much volume you give to each sound at a given time in flash