Teh Jaz Therad

[Jizzo]

this is some shit i made while i was gone cool huh bro yea pretty gay





i would upload some animated shit I did but alas somebody seems to be angry with GroundsNew for some random ass reason so whatever

[rtil]

why did you make a new account

[lenko]

the guy's right arm (his right) in that last pic looks really off to me. i think its too small in context with the rest of the pic

your colour choices are nice but i think you're shading for the sake of detail in some parts instead of trying to convey a lightsource and your character's interaction with it

[billy]

i think it looks cool

ps fuck the man

[DrRumack]

green negros

[CVG]

I think I like the more muted palette in the 2nd pic over the first one and its hot neon skin and flat tone shading. The 2nd one looks more natural and the bodies/pose angle is unique. Overall I get a better sense of the couple and their characters and personality more when you put them in a scene like that. It goes the extra step of getting the viewer to see beyond that typical "pose all twisted and smile" art. In the 2nd pic we are getting a peek into a life and relationship. They have weight in their bodies and it shows well in the way you drew the pillow sinking in and the wrinkles in the clothes.

The other two are just typical pinup shots and don't give me anything besides the look in their face. And they are standing in blank backgrounds which further separate the feel that it's a character beyond the drawing. The first one almost looks like you started drawing on the butt and worked up and ran out of space for the head so you made it small and crammed in the corner. Not to mention the body structure seems off and that one eye is sitting really separate on the face (like it should be closer to her nose when compared to the space of the other one in distance). The third one is okay and you tried a nice foreshortened effect but it's pretty strange and twisted and I can't make out what he's holding even when it's right in our face. White background doesn't help tell us either heh.

So yeah overall, the 2nd pic seems the most complete and solid in construction, lighter colors, and personality. I really also liked the attention to details in it like the flower and skull patterns you drew in (again it helps read into the characters). Keep it up! :] As a little suggestion, shading with a black or gray airbrush tool looks a bit icky and muddy. You might want to try shading their bodies with colors that are darker variations of the main tone or use its compliment color. And the white shines are a little distracting when we don't know where or why it's doing that in the scene when nothing else is following that same light source.

[Mew_User]

I don't think this is YungJazz.

[ExBerian]

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