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Started by MRat, November 11, 2007 08:52 AM

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MRat

Madness Antecedent

Spider I - Song


Feel free tear these to shreds, or compliment, or mildly critique. They're both not new, but I'm new here, so I figure I may as well share.

KBAI!
I was gone, FOR SO LONG


KingDavid

Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

Nadroj0711

'ello gov'na

rtil

antecedent got completely lost after he said 'jesus i am tricky' , i couldn't follow it at all. but i do appreciate that you did fbf lip sync. a lot of animators don't bother with that. one thing i would focus on is making sure your characters don't bleed into your backgrounds. avoid using black lines as thick as the ones used on your characters. you want the characters to pop, not the backgrounds.

MRat

Thanks for the input. With Antecedent I tried to make the characters stand out by using grey outlines instead. I'll keep you comment in mind.

As for what happens after he says "I'm Tricky," they basically just fight and then some cops are outside (sheriff) and so he commits suicide. After the quick credits Jesus ressurects him.


And "faggot?" Whatever for?



Thanks for the input guys, I'll continue to share here.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

rtil

oh don't expect taylor to ever be helpful or useful, that's pretty much all he'll ever say

Nadroj0711

Quote from: rtiloh don't expect taylor to ever be helpful or useful, that's pretty much all he'll ever say
lmao
'ello gov'na

zomfgbie

that spider one was pretty good, cleaned up that would be an impressive fbf movie. i didnt watch the madness one cause i dont like madness lol
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

trent bortknob

it was because he said "KBAI" but yeah i didnt watch them either

MRat

Hah. Well that makes sense then. KBAI is rather annoying, I must admit. Not sure why I said it. Probably to be annoying.

Anyway the Madness one isn't entirely Madness-y. I used strange angles and fbf and stuff. The idea was to take the basic Madness character concept then fuck the whole thing up.

As for Spider, well yah, future installments if I ever get around to them will be cleaner and less cluttered probably. Though in some instances I enjoyed the clutter of Spider. I mostly try to use lots and lots of FBF for character animation. Tweens look so wonky.

Anyway, well do as you please Taylor, I'll not complain.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

zomfgbie

every good animator uses tweens. just not for character animations.

tweens for backgrounds movement and fading (or a scripted camera if youre too high brow for that) and for some objects

tweening a character just makes it static
i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark

MRat

I didn't say I don't use tweens. But generally I still do it all manually. I just have more control that way. I hate having a computer do things for me like that.
I was gone, FOR SO LONG

KingDavid

Quote from: taylor
Quote from: Sinitronit sucks ass okay

and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

adamant

Quote from: FreekCevery good animator uses tweens. just not for character animations.

tweens for backgrounds movement and fading (or a scripted camera if youre too high brow for that) and for some objects

tweening a character just makes it static

right on the ball

HIGH FIVE FUCKER  

zomfgbie

i am dead

<+wwchicken> once i walked into the kitchen and there was a sound
<+wwchicken> but i could only hear it when i stood on one spot in the kitchen
<+wwchicken> then i turned off the light
<+wwchicken> and it was gone
<+wwchicken> then i turned the light back on and there it was again
<+wwchicken> so i thought, its an invisible alien
<+wwchicken> but hes scared of the dark