cartoon poop

[creamcorn]

in this thread im gonna post my drawings and cartoonies. to start it off ill post this cartoon i revised a while ago. spent 2 weeks on it in total (some of you may have seen this)

i know whats wrong with it but you can still give critique if you want/feel the need to


more coming soon!

[lenko]

hey i remember this its still really fun to watch

i think you changed the part where he sniffs up the chicken, it looks much better now

my only gripe really is that the background is just as saturated as the characters, so they dont really pop out as much as they should

[W.A.S.I.M.]

lmao i havent seen this in a while, it looks mad nice but also too sketchy, work on those backgrounds cuz those gradients aint really working out

[creamcorn]

i also think the title is GAY

tbh

[Sinitron]

Nitpickin Picnic

[rtil]

i think sound effects would help with the cartoony pops in this, otherwise it's good for what it is

[emanhattan]

im not sure why but i liked it a lot more before despite the fact theres more work put into it. the background feels a bit distracting.