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October 1, 2007 07:46 AM Last Edit: October 1, 2007 07:46 AM by Billy Monks
I don't know. I'm kind of proud of it. I seriously have no self-esteem so please make all criticism gentle on my feelings. I feel like his ear may be making an encroachment on his eyeball.

Dagolith

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October 1, 2007 08:09 AM Last Edit: October 1, 2007 08:22 AM by Dagolith
it looks to me like you should lower the peek of the noes and round it off, and push the chin out more.

kind'a like this
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rtil

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October 1, 2007 08:38 AM
add a ridge above the nose for the forehead
curve the nose more
make more of an inner curve fromt he bottom of the nose to the upper lip
ridge of the lower jaw goes up and the end of it meets at the bottom tip of the ear, so the ear needs to be waaaay further to our left
eye needs to be more up, and to the left. it sits on a ridge between the top of our nose
hope this has helped

billy

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October 1, 2007 08:47 AM
Quote from: rtiladd a ridge above the nose for the forehead
curve the nose more
make more of an inner curve fromt he bottom of the nose to the upper lip
ridge of the lower jaw goes up and the end of it meets at the bottom tip of the ear, so the ear needs to be waaaay further to our left
eye needs to be more up, and to the left. it sits on a ridge between the top of our nose
hope this has helped

Thanks a lot rtil, that really helps a lot.

Just one question: When you say curve the nose more, do you mean curve it into the face, out of the face or to round the tip?

rtil

#4
October 1, 2007 03:17 PM
curve it into the face. i don't think a rounded end of the nose would look good in this style

billy

#5
October 1, 2007 03:48 PM
Quote from: rtilcurve it into the face. i don't think a rounded end of the nose would look good in this style

Alright, thanks a lot, sir.

KingDavid

#6
October 1, 2007 08:27 PM
Ahh, profile views
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and muse isnt that great anyway
thanks ill use this comment to help myself improve

billy

#7
October 1, 2007 10:41 PM
Here's another pencil sketch. I think I'm just going to dump my pencil sketches in here when I make them rather than cluttering up the board with new threads. Any suggestions on this sketch?

Dagolith

#8
October 1, 2007 10:45 PM
i like it
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Necronomitr0n

#9
October 2, 2007 01:53 AM
His neck is HUGE
<+fawx> im trying to animate a dick coming out of a toaster how do i go on about doing this
<~rtil> well fawx what you would do is delete the fla and do something productive instead
<+ansel> i lure children into my van with candy and then i read them passages from 'the origin of species'
<%ropesnake> billy con ends with billy raping his cat
<+billymonks> FUCK YOU BUG
<~rtil> ya one time i gave this hobo some cat food and he ate it like the animal he is it pleased me

billy

#10
October 2, 2007 02:23 AM
Quote from: SystekHis neck is HUGE

Yeah, I noticed that after I uploaded it...

Dagolith

#11
October 2, 2007 02:34 AM
Quote from: SystekHis neck is HUGE
no it isn't, look at you're own neck.
Maybe it looks that way cause the shoulders are a bit too sloped.
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trent bortknob

#12
October 2, 2007 03:55 AM
looks like bad anime

whoops that wasnt very nice

u know i stillove u billy!!

billy

#13
October 2, 2007 04:42 AM Last Edit: October 2, 2007 05:33 AM by Billy Monks
Quote from: taylorlooks like bad anime

whoops that wasnt very nice

u know i stillove u billy!!

Aw mayun, I'm just experimenting and sincerely trying to improve

Saying it looks like bad anime wasn't necessary, sir

AND I SAID BE SENSITIVE OF MY FEELINGS GOSH

rtil

#14
October 4, 2007 11:22 PM
i wonder if kids in japan get ridiculed if they draw something that looks too western

billy

#15
October 4, 2007 11:38 PM
Quote from: rtili wonder if kids in japan get ridiculed if they draw something that looks too western

apparently people in japan have a huge fetish for western culture

like the opposite of the states
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