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Show posts MenuQuote from: rtilthe art was great, but as with all comics brought into flash i had a lot of trouble with the pacing. there was a series called "broken saints" that sort of did what you did here. it just bored me to death regardless of the quality of the art. granted, that one had no voices. the voices did help, although some of your VA's were really talented (the old man) and some of them were not (the guy who kept putting a delay effect on his voice). i know you're gonna be mad at me for saying this, but i think this would just be better as a comic. it's really hard for an author to judge how long each piece of text should be on the screen, and some times i was only halfway through a paragraph and it would dissapear. other times it was there forever and i was waiting for it to go away. if you want to make something similar to this in the future, i suggest having people press spacebar or something when they want to move on to the next part. that would be easy to code and may save your viewers a lot of trouble, like myself. hope i've been helpful. keep it up uni
Quote from: FreekCthe story was interesting. i got a bit lost though, i dont like reading too much in animations. the effects at the start were cool, really set the mood. also great artwork.
only criticism is some bits seemed like a comic more than an animation. could do with some lip syncing in some parts when its mostly dialogue.
Quote from: MishkaMashQuote from: unicomicshere is a new animation did ive been working i hope you like it, its a digital mangawho did the voice acting for it, cus it wasn't really acting
http://www.lifepoint1.com/kazahana/flash/u...cs/hgs1main.php
although the rest was pretty cool
Quote from: rtilare you part of the life.1 team or do you just make comics for their site? i never understood how that works. i always see 'kazahana' flashes on the portal
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